It's no sekrit I'm loving Life. [livejournal.com profile] aj said it best when she said, "Honestly, this is not an amazingly fantastic show. I mean, there are some definite rough spots, but for real? Most of those are blown away for me because of the little character moments that make me jump up and down." So true, lady. So true.

This week's episode killed me, with the partner-development and the coffee scene and the wall scene and WOW. The treatment of music in this show is wonderful, too - see: my journal header, but also the diversity of tracks used. Love it!

And now, for the Non-Shippers, I found myself breaking my Mega Writer's Block by writing...Dani/Charlie! OMG!

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TITLE: The Edge Of
FANDOM: Life, Dani/Charlie
RATING: LOL SEX
DISCLAIMER: T'ain't mine.




The Edge Of
Life, 8th December 2007



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NOTES: No, really, I ain't shipping them. Quickly written, quickly dismissed, quickly re-embraced.

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I'm drinking what used to be sin
And touching the edge of her skin

"You Make Me Smile", Blue October


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“This didn’t happen.”


“Well, it did happen.”


“It didn’t, I mean that.”


“It’s impossible to say something didn’t happen, when it obviously did, considering that-"


“If you continue that sentence, I will throw you out, hide your clothes and call the SWAT team.”


“I have no problem with being naked. It’s natural.”


“Please, please shut up.”



---


Particularly messy murders leave scars on more than just the parties involved. Ask Charlie Crews, with his hidden prison tatts and sudden need for Vitamin C; murder’s a bitch and so are the people who commit it.


He’s being driven home by his partner, and she’s quiet. This isn’t exactly world-shattering, but she’s more than quiet, pensive or horrified or angry or tired, and her hands are gripping the wheel making her knuckles whiter than the thin line that used to be her mouth.


“You okay?”


“Sure.”


Right.


Dani pulls the car over, expertly, into a spot and gets out of the car. She’s half-way across the street when Charlie calls out the window “this is your house”, and he only knows she heard him by the way her body seems to deflate like a lead balloon.


“It’s fine, Reese.” Stumbling out of the car, locking it behind him, he runs over the road and forgets about his coat on the backseat. It’s not cold though, but she seems like she is, and he realises the dead, mutilated kids they just left behind in the morgue has effected her more than he originally thought.


“I have a couch,” she mutters, and they walk together, apart, to her front door and through to her empty, impersonal apartment and he wonders if he should grab his coat because he doesn’t think she has spare blankets.


It’s 2am, and no-one speaks.


He doesn’t exactly know when she jumped on top of him, but he knows it went from Pardon? to WHOA when his head cracked against the wall and a framed print of some faceless American landscape that he’s certain came with the apartment.


She’s tiny, and her mouth is all over him and the Sane Detective part of him wants to stop but the Charlie Crews, Normal Human Male and Still Getting Over a 12 Year Dry Spell part is overriding like an overbite.


“Reese,” he manages, but she’s stuck her tongue in and – hey – she’s lost her shirt and her plain black t-shirt bra is more than he can handle. “Dani!”


Her hair is everywhere. “You, look like, a crazy woman. What...?” Breathless is an understatement, but he tries to be the voice of reason.


“This doesn’t mean anything, Crews,” she pants. He forgets to be Zen when his hormones overwhelm his brain, and everything goes to black when his pants go down with her.


--


She’s tiny, but there’s curves and lines and breasts, and she’s soft like a girl but still as hard as Detective Daniela Reese is in the bull pit. Rough, pulling his hair and pushing against him; not allowing him to take the reins until she says so and he knows this is just her way of forgetting those kids but hell, it’s helping him too.


Charlie flips her, and she’s submissive for a moment, allowing him to trace around and play maps along her stomach. She touches his tattoos, dark, smudged prison jobs meaning “zen” and “hope” and “whatever”; before she almost lunges like a tiger and he’s taken again.


When they come separately, it’s strange and she cries but she hides her face.


It’s the best lay he’s had since getting out of jail, but he’d never tell her that, so he rolls away and waits until he hears the breathing of sleep.


It will be weird in the morning, he thinks. For now, he rolls back to her and wraps her up, because for once, she deserves to be more than just protected.


---


“Should we talk about this?”


“Pass me my pants.”


“I think it’s going to affect our working relationship.”


“Shirt.”


“I’ve seen you naked.”


“If you don’t shut up, Crews, I swear to God…”


“Here’s your bra. That goes on before the shirt.”



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Fin.


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Bless them. And bless Sarah Shahi for being so cute.
Tags:

From: [identity profile] jesshelga.livejournal.com


Amazing. Amazing. The banter was so spot on, and if it ever happens, I imagine it will be exactly like that. Because the Power of Dani is just that powerful.

From: [identity profile] piecesofalice.livejournal.com


She's like a tiny little vortex. With 'TUDE.

And coffee.

And kick-ass sunglasses.

From: [identity profile] mjryan.livejournal.com


That might be the best description of her I've ever seen.

Oh, I'm here through a link within a link. I think. But, I'm glad I made it. Great fic.
ext_18985: (kickass girl)

From: [identity profile] aj.livejournal.com


OMG! I love it! There's Dani throwing him around and seeing his prison tats and being tiny and awesome and AHAHAHA, Charlie notices the breasts!

"Here's your bra. That goes on before the shirt."

<3 HE WOULD TOTALLY TORTURE HER HERE TOO. I love them.

From: [identity profile] piecesofalice.livejournal.com


THEY ARE SO EASY AND FUN TO WRITE. I mean, just so much JOY writing them.

I'm all for the prison tatt refs. Although it's totes going to become CLICHE, like him eating fruit or meditating or blowing up an iPod. I LOVE THEM.
ext_18985: (amused)

From: [identity profile] aj.livejournal.com


I love them because they act like 9 year olds shoving each other into the dirt and it is FABULOUS. Dude, write me 7 year old Dani and 11 year old Charlie investigating who stole 12 year old Ted's lunch money and I will BUY YOU DINNER.

Charlie blowing up an iPod.. *CACKLE*

From: [identity profile] jesshelga.livejournal.com


HAHAHAHA!!! Jim Henson's Life Babies!

(P.S. Bet it turns out that Ted funneled his lunch money into a secret snack account.)

From: [identity profile] piecesofalice.livejournal.com


And is running a test copy scam like Nelson from The Simpsons out of the boys second floor bathroom, the funds of which he uses to fund his milk bar, selling high-grade milk products and Hershey's bars.
ext_18985: (amused)

From: [identity profile] aj.livejournal.com


*falls over laughing* Oh, MAN. I love it when there's a new fandom and everything's shiny and people haven't started pointing fingers and the really stupid people haven't noticed the show yet!

Also, 'Life Babies' makes me grin like a loon. Ahahahaha!

From: [identity profile] piecesofalice.livejournal.com


Is there a way to keep the stupid people out? Like the crazy Constance/Charlie shippers, or the scary middle-aged obsessives who creep me out with their love for VDO fannishness?

We should make icons to this effect. Or be passive aggressive when they come about, y'know.
ext_18985: (geeky)

From: [identity profile] aj.livejournal.com


I wish. I think we're just going to have to enjoy these halcyon days while they last. *clings to them hard*

From: [identity profile] piecesofalice.livejournal.com


Oh, it's on.

Just wait til I get home - Little Charlie with a cowlick, Ted with early salt-and-pepper hair and Dani pushing boys over in the schoolyard with Junior Aviators on.
ext_18985: (evil)

From: [identity profile] aj.livejournal.com


\o/

Little Charlie with a cowlick! Dani in little khaki shorts with her hands jammed on her hips and GLARING at people twice her size! Charlie and Dani could be next-door neighbors and their parents are all friends and stuff (Charlie was wrongly put in detention for five years because of a rather weird incident in Kindergarten that Charlie's still trying to figure out and that's how he met Ted!) and Charlie's dad is all "You take care of that little girl in school there, Charlie!"

Not know, of course, that Dani's been shaking down Charlie's friends for their milk money since she turned five and realized that if you ran everywhere you could kick really hard and being tiny can sometimes be awesome.

From: [identity profile] piecesofalice.livejournal.com


MWAHAHAHAAH YES

Little Dani in her low-cut Converse and messy pigtails, smooshing peanut butter sandwiches into Little Roman's face because he was trying to pay the other little girls to roll up the hems of their skirts or something.

Lil Ted was put into detention for offering a valet service to the teachers. How he could drive, or see over the wheel, remains a mystery...

From: [identity profile] grenadine.livejournal.com


YAY, YOU POSTED IT. This is so, so perfect. I'm not shipping them yet either, but the idea of the two of them together is utterly hilarious. (She would kill him. Within a week. I am certain of this.)

YAY.

From: [identity profile] piecesofalice.livejournal.com


There would be lots of practical jokes then making up afterwards.

And he'd make her wear a reindeer-covered knit jumper at Christmas time, and she'd hate him. YAY

From: [identity profile] anxietygrrl.livejournal.com


Oh, man. This is perfect. This non-ship is shaping up to be pretty awesome.

From: [identity profile] vonnie-k.livejournal.com


[livejournal.com profile] kirbyfest linked to this fic the other day and I finally had the chance to read it. You captured their voices *just right*. It's got such a nice mix of angst and their partner-y adorableness. And that last line! I can totally hear Damian Lewis saying it with a smirk on his face.

This show better last or I will be very upset. *does the non-cancellation dance*

From: [identity profile] piecesofalice.livejournal.com


Oh, danke!

AND I AM TOTES DOING THE NON-CANCELLATION DANCE. Can we give it proper moves? Maybe a Charlie-esque biting of a pear?

From: [identity profile] raincitygirl.livejournal.com


Oh man. So good. Probably because it's so VERY in character. I could see something like this happening on the show (although perhaps they'd do a tasteful fade to black rather than showing everything) if they ever do get together on the show.

From: [identity profile] broedym.livejournal.com


Oh fucking YES!

Now, after that eloquent statement all I can say is THAT was hot. THAT I can buy. Every day of the week and twice on Sundays.

Mmm, Sundays...

From: [identity profile] piecesofalice.livejournal.com


Sundays are pretty awesome.

Cake on Sundays is EVEN MORE awesome!

(thanks :)

From: [identity profile] sg1padawan.livejournal.com


Others have said it but this really was perfect. The dialogue was just so... THEM. Thank you for writing awesome Charlie & Dani! *worships*

From: [identity profile] i-love-me.livejournal.com


Aww, this is so wonderful, hot and simply brilliant!
Thank you soooooo much for this joy! :)

From: [identity profile] scarletumbrella.livejournal.com


I can't believe I'm saying this, but that was brilliant. Never thought I could ever really like Crews/Reese but you keep them so in character it's hard not to at this point. ^_^

From: [identity profile] fragglebo.livejournal.com


WOW! This is perfect, exactly how I could see it playing out and you are so true to the characters and have their speech just right. LOVED IT! :D

From: [identity profile] jaydecrow.livejournal.com


I just wanted to say that I loved this, although I think I actually loved the comment thread even more.

So, I was going to friend you to keep up with the fic, and just thought I'd be polite and say so.

So...so.

From: [identity profile] gornishka.livejournal.com


Oh, wow. Their dialogue is so spot-on and right. I'm staunchly Dani/Charlie as partners only, but in this fic? I'm on this non-ship with glee.

For now, he rolls back to her and wraps her up, because for once, she deserves to be more than just protected. ! Wonderful.

From: [identity profile] firthgal.livejournal.com


OMG, I LOVE YOU!!!!!!! This was absolutely amazing. In fact, all of your Life fics are amazing and beautifully in character. And OMG, this was so hot and perfect and exactly how a sex scene would go down for them. Just... perfection. I especially love the morning after dialog, and how their relationship really hasn't changed at all, they've just seen each other naked. SO PERFECT! This made me squee like crazy. I think it's no secret that I'm totally shipping them, but in that "I want it to be extremely slow and tortuous" kind of way. And I've pictured their first time being completely spur of the moment, emotional Dani attacking Charlie then wanting to forget about it, and that's what you've given me, and it was perfect. OMG, I LOVE YOU SO MUCH! THANK YOU FOR BEING SO AWESOME!

From: [identity profile] annakovsky.livejournal.com


Oh man, the voices in this are great, and I love the dynamic you set up.


Charlie flips her, and she’s submissive for a moment, allowing him to trace around and play maps along her stomach. She touches his tattoos, dark, smudged prison jobs meaning “zen” and “hope” and “whatever”; before she almost lunges like a tiger and he’s taken again.


Oh man.

From: [identity profile] piecesofalice.livejournal.com


I'm like, "WHUT? WHO WHAT PARTY?"

Then I saw the post. AHAHAHAHAHAHA I geddit. *wanders away*

From: [identity profile] daygloparker.livejournal.com


UH YES, I am terrible late but have brought champagne and cookies so please don't kick me out.

From: [identity profile] piecesofalice.livejournal.com


Lady, you know you can stay, even if you only brought your fine, fine self.

[/Sisqo et al]

From: [identity profile] citosol.livejournal.com

last but not least


OMG!
Perfect.
Beautiful.

moremoremoremoremoremore pleeeeeeeease!!! ^_^

From: [identity profile] elzed.livejournal.com


Niiiice. And I can buy this in canon, even if they should not be.
jcalanthe: woman dancing in a field of flowers (yay)

From: [personal profile] jcalanthe


You know, I'm so totally happy they haven't gone here in canon, but this? This is excellent, and I can completely buy that this happened very early on & they have never spoken of it (despite Charlie's attempts).

Also, I blame you that I'm up past my bedtime. :)
ext_1770: @ _jems_ (fandom: life i'm zennish)

From: [identity profile] oxoniensis.livejournal.com


I do so love this! Their reactions are perfect!
ext_39897: Andrew Buchan as John Mercer, holding a gun (Jason - Laugh)

From: [identity profile] lamaudite.livejournal.com


Perfect!
Currently being rec'd (for shows that ended too soon) and I gotta second! Now I think I'm going to rewatch both seasons...
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