Oh, my. Sometimes I swear you're Jesus but with fandom drugs. That made sense in my head.
I like that you started at the end and especially the image of her sleeping, which was perfect. And that he thought he'd be able to shave with the door open and him in the other room.
I also love that she wins, later, in the bathroom, though that's really not the point.
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Date: 2008-03-02 03:29 pm (UTC)I like that you started at the end and especially the image of her sleeping, which was perfect. And that he thought he'd be able to shave with the door open and him in the other room.
I also love that she wins, later, in the bathroom, though that's really not the point.
CONCLUSION: YES YES YES, I won't sleep again.