"Did you visit him?" "What?" "Did you visit him in jail?" "No." "Why?" "Crews." "You loved him, didn't you?" Dani clutched the wheel, stared ahead. Charlie's eyes bore into the side of her head.
Whoa. Ouch. For the both of them. I really like all the subtext in this; it's put together so well. And Dani, poor poor Dani. Great work.
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Date: 2008-06-02 04:33 am (UTC)"What?"
"Did you visit him in jail?"
"No."
"Why?"
"Crews."
"You loved him, didn't you?"
Dani clutched the wheel, stared ahead. Charlie's eyes bore into the side of her head.
Whoa. Ouch. For the both of them. I really like all the subtext in this; it's put together so well. And Dani, poor poor Dani. Great work.