OH MY GOD!!!!! This was absolute brilliance from start to finish and it made me so ridiculously giddy that I am actually crying happy tears and holding my hand to my chest and going, "OH!" in a high voice. It was everything and more than I had ever dreamed of for a future fic. I've been imagining them married so often that I was hoping somebody would write something like this. OH MY GOD, IT WAS PERFECT!!!!!! Beautifully poetic throughout the whole thing, and I could feel absolutely everything that Juliet was going through. My favorite line (everyone else has already pointed it out, but oh well):
In the early morning, as the conception started to happen, he spoke to her of police codes with his body against hers and his hands in her hair, and she knew it was something like a love song.
That put me into such a state of breathlessness that I almost passed out. LOVE!!!! Oh, and I adore that moment in the supermarket. And the proposal! It was so them to have her say something totally unrelated to the proposal and him thinking that she was saying no. Just... gah!!!! Perfection.
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Date: 2008-02-23 07:06 am (UTC)In the early morning, as the conception started to happen, he spoke to her of police codes with his body against hers and his hands in her hair, and she knew it was something like a love song.
That put me into such a state of breathlessness that I almost passed out. LOVE!!!! Oh, and I adore that moment in the supermarket. And the proposal! It was so them to have her say something totally unrelated to the proposal and him thinking that she was saying no. Just... gah!!!! Perfection.