ext_10465 ([identity profile] annakovsky.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] piecesofalice 2008-04-07 04:25 pm (UTC)

Oh man, the voices in this are great, and I love the dynamic you set up.


Charlie flips her, and she’s submissive for a moment, allowing him to trace around and play maps along her stomach. She touches his tattoos, dark, smudged prison jobs meaning “zen” and “hope” and “whatever”; before she almost lunges like a tiger and he’s taken again.


Oh man.

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